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Love by ~36degrees:icon36degrees:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Open


Oh treacherous thing! Oh bloody thing!
All slick muscle, soft heart, white bone
All aching teeth and quivering lips all tears
and soul-deep moans

Oh ravenous, oh breaking thing!
All held-in pleas, all swallowed sighs, unvoiced screams
All bitten nails, swollen tongue all bile
and half-dead dreams.
©2006-2010 ~36degrees
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A short meditation on the pain of love

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~MistyDark Apr 13, 2006, 2:59:37 AM
Absolutely perfect! It evokes a deep feeling of "accusing" love of apocryphal pleasure.
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~ngenius Apr 13, 2006, 9:50:02 AM
Hey, I'm not up for an advanced critique at the moment, but I just thought I'd let you know I've picked the pen back up again, and that it looks like you've really improved! i'm really liking this,

~Dave

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Asking For It.
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~36degrees Apr 17, 2006, 9:19:34 AM
it's cool, when you're up to it, I'd welcome any advice you'd want to give. I've read your newly posted poems and I love them.

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So stay sweetly numb
Remain lifeless, love.
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~36degrees Apr 17, 2006, 9:21:56 AM
*with wide eyes* Why thank you!

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So stay sweetly numb
Remain lifeless, love.
:iconmistydark:
~MistyDark Apr 17, 2006, 11:36:30 AM
Your welcome. Why apocryphal? I mean apocryphal in a not too bas sense.
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~36degrees Apr 17, 2006, 2:41:54 PM
Sorry, I meant "Why, thank you" not "Why? Thank you." 'apocryphal' is now my new favourite word!

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So stay sweetly numb
Remain lifeless, love.
:iconmistydark:
~MistyDark Apr 18, 2006, 1:29:17 AM
oh i see ;P lets say then undistinguished :)
:icon36degrees:
~36degrees Apr 18, 2006, 10:34:50 AM
Works for me. :)

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So stay sweetly numb
Remain lifeless, love.
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