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Whispered etopia in the eyes of a boy
promises of a private heaven
a haven

Screamed oblivion from the hands of a girl
broken and giving you hell
without shelter
©2005-2010 ~36degrees
:icon36degrees:

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An akward attempt at a theme to a "love lost" type of poem.

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:icon36degrees:
:hug: I may get back into the swing of things yet. Thank you for giving me hope.

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So stay sweetly numb
Remain lifeless, love.
:iconironic-injustice:
your welcome, now u r going to specify your gender! please?
:icon36degrees:
*grin* maybe...it *was* in my journal, you know. *laughs* yep.

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So stay sweetly numb
Remain lifeless, love.
:iconironic-injustice:
yeah a journal that isn't up any more i bet and i will not guess damn it
grr
:icon36degrees:
I don't want you to guess it. I've sent a note. Please don't think I'm strange. I'm off to comment on your poem now!

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So stay sweetly numb
Remain lifeless, love.
:iconcradlegrrl333:
Yeah, they are a little short, but atleast this is giving you the indication that you have not lost anything when it comes to your writing ability. Beautifully written. :heart:

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And therein rose vast wonders,
Affections to be seen,
Fathered from the plundered,
Reflections of a dream...
:blackrose:
:icon36degrees:
Oh, you're just saying that! :blush: Thank you...

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So stay sweetly numb
Remain lifeless, love.
:iconcradlegrrl333:
No way! You know I wouldn't do that... Or don't you? Huh, Punk? :P

No, I meant what I said.

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And therein rose vast wonders,
Affections to be seen,
Fathered from the plundered,
Reflections of a dream...
:blackrose:

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October 18, 2005
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